Thursday, January 26, 2012
Yes Ma'am Summery
In the story “Yes Ma’am” is about a young boy trying to rob a big woman named Mrs. Jones. When he fails at the robbery and gets beaten by the big woman he tried to rob she escorted him back to her house and made him clean himself up and fed him. While she did this she was also lecturing him. After she fed him she gave him some money and let him leave.
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If I were you, I would most certainly go back and revise this piece. I believe spelled summary wrong in the title. Also, the second sentence appears to be a run on, missing a period, something just doesn't sound right when you said he tried to rob she escorted him... see doesn't make sense.
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