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Friday, March 9, 2012
Peewee's Fatal Flaw
Authors Note: This piece is a character description on Peewee. He is one of the characters in the book I am reading, Fallen Angels.
Peewee walked into the room, over confident in his prankster sort of way. His eyes scanning the crowd looking for his so called “target”. Once he found his “target” he performed his mediocre trick on the six foot six inch brick wall of a man he decided to pick on. His trick merely annoyed the brick wall making him madder than before. He shot up from his chair like a speeding bullet ready to charge like a bull. The brick wall was getting ready to beat the crap out of Peewee, but luckily for Peewee’s sake the Lieutenant came in and told them that they had to go on patrol. The Brick wall gave Peewee the death stare as if to inform him that his time was coming.
When we got back to camp Peewee hid behind some bushes while we waited for Johnson (the brick wall) to get back from the chopper into camp so he could get a couple cheap shots in before Johnson beat his sorry butt. If you asked me he was a little bit scared, but I don't blame him. He has a man like a rhino for an enemy.
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Good job but you should try to descibe the character a little better.
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