Thursday, October 13, 2011

Haunted House

As I walk up to the ominous barn I freeze unable to move like I'm paralyzed from the neck down. If it weren’t for my friend pulling me along I’d be at home like a coward to afraid to go in the haunted house. As we enter I feel the chills running down my back. As if someone is blowing on it, we walk in to the first room and just as I think that it’s not going to be that bad. A clown jumps down from the ceiling and we all shriek out and terror. I then realize this is going to be the worst night of my life

1 comment:

  1. Nice choice of words. Ominous, paralyzed, chilled, shriek; these give a good sense of the setting. Good job!

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